Monday 13 September 2010

Next Scene of The Screenplay

Heyah, reader! Now, reading this, you might be thinking "Is this from the same screenplay I read earlier?" Well. Yes. Don't worry, it'll become relevant sooner or later.
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CUT TO:
EXT. SCHOOLYARD, 4:00 PM., AUTUMN. The playground is completely still, but for one little girl, MARIA, around 10, sitting on the swingset, gently swinging back and forth, feet not leaving the ground. The swings squeak; they’re in good need of oiling.
TANYA, 36, walks by the schoolyard and notices MARIA. She stops, staring at the girl just sitting there, alone.
TANYA
Hey, kid. Are you okay?
MARIA looks up to answer. (MARIA’s voice is emotionless throughout the conversation.)
MARIA
...Yeah.
TANYA
Where’s your mommy?
MARIA
She’s not here anymore.
TANYA
Where is she?
MARIA
Daddy won’t tell me.
TANYA walks a little closer, as MARIA looks back down.
TANYA
Where’s your daddy?
MARIA
He’ll be here soon. He’s always late.
TANYA
Well, it’s dangerous for a girl like you to just be sitting here. Now, listen, I’m going to keep you company until your daddy comes by, alright? And then, we can all have a chat, okay?
MARIA
Whatever.
TANYA crouches down to try and make eye contact; MARIA’s eyes are fixed firmly on the ground.
TANYA
What’s your name?
MARIA
What’s yours?
TANYA
I’m Tanya. Tanya Forrester. And you?
MARIA
Maria.
TANYA
And, what’s your daddy’s name?
MARIA spots something from behind TANYA’s shoulder.
MARIA
You can ask him yourself.
TANYA turns around, looking up to see FREEMAN standing there, GLARING at her.
FREEMAN
The fuck are you doing with my daughter?
TANYA
I was keeping her company. You do know you left her alone here?
FREEMAN
Yeah, and I’d prefer it if she was left alone. If you could back off, that’d be great.
(to MARIA, keeping his eyes on TANYA)
C’mon, Maria.
MARIA gets off the swing, skipping to her father’s side, giving TANYA a backward glance. TANYA gets up, glaring at FREEMAN.
TANYA
Listen, I don’t know how long your daughter’s been waiting here for-
FREEMAN
Well, what the hell do you want me to do? Get fired just so I can pick up my little girl on time? It’s my fucking little girl.
TANYA
You’re what’s wrong with this country. What kind of example are you setting for your girl?
FREEMAN
None of your fucking business.
FREEMAN and MARIA exit, walking to their car, leaving TANYA standing at the swingset, staring at them in disgust.

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